Well, I was out for dinner with my family before going to see new Moon and my mom gave me inspiration for a story. Basically the storyline is Renesmee and Jacob's like when Renesmee gets older. I hope you like it. Oh, I don't have a name for the actual story, if you have any suggestions, email me!
Chapter 1
The Wedding
“Today’s the big day, sweetheart,” Edward, my father, cooed to me.
“I know, Dad, and I believe I’m getting married today.” I had just turned 20. My growth had slowed and I was like any other human, except for the fact that my parents were vampires, I was a cross-breed human-vampire that could invade people’s thoughts to make them see what I am thinking, and I was getting married to a werewolf.
“You look gorgeous, honey.” And I really did, today is not a day to be modest. My flowing curly brunette hair almost reached the middle of my back and my pale skin glowed. My long white vale trailed along behind me even farther than my dress. My dress was snow white. It was strapless and tight until my waist, showing off my perfect figure, where it then flared out like a princess dress.
“Thanks mom.”
“You’re welcome sweetie. Now it’s about time to get down to the ceremony.” Bella said as she began to lead me out of the room. Esme handed me my bouquet and followed me out the door. The ceremony was in the Cullen’s house, just as it was for my parents, Edward and Bella. I closed my eyes and let my mother guide me to the stairs, I wanted this to be a surprise when I open my eyes to walk down the staircase and see all my family, and especially my fiancé, Jacob Black.
“Okay, its time,” somebody said, but I wasn’t paying enough attention to tell who it was. My Dad put his arm through mine and began to lead me down the stairs. I open my eyes to see the Cullen’s huge living room transformed. The entire room was filled with gorgeous pink roses and my favourite, Calla Lilies. Alice really outdid herself this time. At first I looked at the people sitting on either side of the aisle. One side is my side of the family, in the first row was my mother and father and my grandparents, Renee and Charlie and Carlisle and Esme. The rest of the seats were filled with my friends. The Denali Coven came to see me get married too. On the other side is Jake’s family. In the crowd I saw his father, Billy, and the members of his pack were all there, and hard to miss, they are all pretty big men. Then I see Jake and my heart stops. He looked so handsome. His black hair cropped short, that’s the way I like it, and his russet coloured skin is gorgeous. He had the biggest grin on his face, showing his amazing perfect white teeth. Next to him is was best man, Quil Atera. By now I’m about halfway down the aisle. Goddamn, could this music be any slower? I would really like to just run down the aisle and be in Jake’s arms. Finally, after an agonizingly slow walk down the aisle, I finally reach the alter. We had asked my mother’s friend’s father to marry us, Mr. Weber, just as he had done for my parents. He says his part as I gazed into Jake’s beautiful eyes. Then we say our vows, keeping it simple, and when the rings were slipped onto our fingers, I felt tears swell up in my eyes.
“You may now kiss the bride.” Mr. Weber said. Jake leaned in and passionately kissed me as the crowd clapped and cheered. I was no longer Renesmee Cullen, but Renesmee Black, and I loved it. Now the music was playing and we are leaving the room, going back up the stairs to find Alice who was our photographer for our wedding photos. We got our pictures taken while everyone else would stay here and chat for a while.
“Let’s go,” Alice urged. Alice lead us out into their backyard. It was the perfect setting for our pictures since it was the middle of spring and the trees were a gorgeous green and the flowers Alice planted were bright and colourful. We take about 200 photos before we had to stop Alice and tell her we needed to get inside for the reception. She grudgingly obliged and followed us inside. The room which we had just gotten married in was already transformed into a dining area for the guests. I don’t know how they do it, but they do it well. In place of the alter was the head table. The 2 spots in the middle were empty. On one side was Quil and the other side was my Maid of Honour, Leah Clearwater. We had come to be great friends since Jake and her didn’t hate each other and she got over her hate for vampires, I mean she wasn’t thrilled that my parents were full vampires but we usually hung out at her house. To her I was just like any human, besides the fact that I smelt a little off to her. Jake and I took our places at the head table and people started their speeches. First was Quil.
“Jake, you’ve been my best friend for years, and I remember when you used to be this tiny, gangly guy, and now look at you, all grown up, getting married. Dude, just remember not to forget about me. Jake, I always thought Renesmee was too good for you, but now I see you two are perfect for each other. Congrats my friend!” And then it was Leah’s turn.
“Renesmee, I remember when you were first born and I absolutely hated you, but then when you go older I grew to like you and we became good friends. I thought Jake was too good for you, before we became friends and now I know I was dead wrong, even possibly the exact opposite, but I see now how good you two are for each other. Congratulations!”
The speeches went on until everyone had said their part and the food came out. The vampires tried to make it look like they were eating, but I heard use the excuses like, “I’m not really hungry right now,” or “I had a big lunch.” Soon dinner was over and it was time to cut the cake. They brought out our giant 4 layered cake. It was white with gorgeous handmade sugar flowers on it, it was so gorgeous I didn’t want to cut it. But we did and Jake and I took the cake, went to put it in each others mouths, and shoved it in the others face. Dinner was over then and we were all ushered outside into a giant tent lit with hundreds of tiny lights. On one end was a live band and they began playing and people were swaying to the music for hours.
Sometime around 1:00 am when almost everyone had left, Jake and I decided to leave. We went back to our little cottage in the woods near the Cullen’s house. It was originally my mom and dad’s place but when Jake and I got engaged, they gave it to us and bought their own house. When we reached the cottage, Jake lifted me out of the car, walked up to the door, kicked it open and carried me through the house and into our bedroom. He kissed me gently and laid me on the bed, beginning to kiss me more urgently. It was then that I realized I had something very important to tell him, but maybe it would have to wait until morning.
The Wedding
“Today’s the big day, sweetheart,” Edward, my father, cooed to me.
“I know, Dad, and I believe I’m getting married today.” I had just turned 20. My growth had slowed and I was like any other human, except for the fact that my parents were vampires, I was a cross-breed human-vampire that could invade people’s thoughts to make them see what I am thinking, and I was getting married to a werewolf.
“You look gorgeous, honey.” And I really did, today is not a day to be modest. My flowing curly brunette hair almost reached the middle of my back and my pale skin glowed. My long white vale trailed along behind me even farther than my dress. My dress was snow white. It was strapless and tight until my waist, showing off my perfect figure, where it then flared out like a princess dress.
“Thanks mom.”
“You’re welcome sweetie. Now it’s about time to get down to the ceremony.” Bella said as she began to lead me out of the room. Esme handed me my bouquet and followed me out the door. The ceremony was in the Cullen’s house, just as it was for my parents, Edward and Bella. I closed my eyes and let my mother guide me to the stairs, I wanted this to be a surprise when I open my eyes to walk down the staircase and see all my family, and especially my fiancé, Jacob Black.
“Okay, its time,” somebody said, but I wasn’t paying enough attention to tell who it was. My Dad put his arm through mine and began to lead me down the stairs. I open my eyes to see the Cullen’s huge living room transformed. The entire room was filled with gorgeous pink roses and my favourite, Calla Lilies. Alice really outdid herself this time. At first I looked at the people sitting on either side of the aisle. One side is my side of the family, in the first row was my mother and father and my grandparents, Renee and Charlie and Carlisle and Esme. The rest of the seats were filled with my friends. The Denali Coven came to see me get married too. On the other side is Jake’s family. In the crowd I saw his father, Billy, and the members of his pack were all there, and hard to miss, they are all pretty big men. Then I see Jake and my heart stops. He looked so handsome. His black hair cropped short, that’s the way I like it, and his russet coloured skin is gorgeous. He had the biggest grin on his face, showing his amazing perfect white teeth. Next to him is was best man, Quil Atera. By now I’m about halfway down the aisle. Goddamn, could this music be any slower? I would really like to just run down the aisle and be in Jake’s arms. Finally, after an agonizingly slow walk down the aisle, I finally reach the alter. We had asked my mother’s friend’s father to marry us, Mr. Weber, just as he had done for my parents. He says his part as I gazed into Jake’s beautiful eyes. Then we say our vows, keeping it simple, and when the rings were slipped onto our fingers, I felt tears swell up in my eyes.
“You may now kiss the bride.” Mr. Weber said. Jake leaned in and passionately kissed me as the crowd clapped and cheered. I was no longer Renesmee Cullen, but Renesmee Black, and I loved it. Now the music was playing and we are leaving the room, going back up the stairs to find Alice who was our photographer for our wedding photos. We got our pictures taken while everyone else would stay here and chat for a while.
“Let’s go,” Alice urged. Alice lead us out into their backyard. It was the perfect setting for our pictures since it was the middle of spring and the trees were a gorgeous green and the flowers Alice planted were bright and colourful. We take about 200 photos before we had to stop Alice and tell her we needed to get inside for the reception. She grudgingly obliged and followed us inside. The room which we had just gotten married in was already transformed into a dining area for the guests. I don’t know how they do it, but they do it well. In place of the alter was the head table. The 2 spots in the middle were empty. On one side was Quil and the other side was my Maid of Honour, Leah Clearwater. We had come to be great friends since Jake and her didn’t hate each other and she got over her hate for vampires, I mean she wasn’t thrilled that my parents were full vampires but we usually hung out at her house. To her I was just like any human, besides the fact that I smelt a little off to her. Jake and I took our places at the head table and people started their speeches. First was Quil.
“Jake, you’ve been my best friend for years, and I remember when you used to be this tiny, gangly guy, and now look at you, all grown up, getting married. Dude, just remember not to forget about me. Jake, I always thought Renesmee was too good for you, but now I see you two are perfect for each other. Congrats my friend!” And then it was Leah’s turn.
“Renesmee, I remember when you were first born and I absolutely hated you, but then when you go older I grew to like you and we became good friends. I thought Jake was too good for you, before we became friends and now I know I was dead wrong, even possibly the exact opposite, but I see now how good you two are for each other. Congratulations!”
The speeches went on until everyone had said their part and the food came out. The vampires tried to make it look like they were eating, but I heard use the excuses like, “I’m not really hungry right now,” or “I had a big lunch.” Soon dinner was over and it was time to cut the cake. They brought out our giant 4 layered cake. It was white with gorgeous handmade sugar flowers on it, it was so gorgeous I didn’t want to cut it. But we did and Jake and I took the cake, went to put it in each others mouths, and shoved it in the others face. Dinner was over then and we were all ushered outside into a giant tent lit with hundreds of tiny lights. On one end was a live band and they began playing and people were swaying to the music for hours.
Sometime around 1:00 am when almost everyone had left, Jake and I decided to leave. We went back to our little cottage in the woods near the Cullen’s house. It was originally my mom and dad’s place but when Jake and I got engaged, they gave it to us and bought their own house. When we reached the cottage, Jake lifted me out of the car, walked up to the door, kicked it open and carried me through the house and into our bedroom. He kissed me gently and laid me on the bed, beginning to kiss me more urgently. It was then that I realized I had something very important to tell him, but maybe it would have to wait until morning.
I would appreciate any feedback!
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5 comments:
Loved it! Great!
thats really really good...keep it up :)
That's very nice. i have also written a story about Reensme and It have become about 13 chapters but you gave me ideas because ''Nessie'' get adult when she was ''7'' and I didn't writ like that..but sill impressive
Thanks everyone so much, I really appreciate all the feedback. I haven't written anymore, but when I do I will be sure to post it!
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